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"Number 21" by Sascha Michael Trinkaus
taken at Phranang Beach, Rai Leh; Krabi, Thailand

Copyright 2009

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:icontalescaper:
This is one fine example of technical excellence in photography. Of course, the subject matter is somewhat cliché and looks more like an advertisement in a travelguide, but it does that well. The perspective and composition, as others have pointed out, are very well chosen, although they are a bit obvious. I like to see this photo as a lesson to photographers. Why they should seek for angles, go to their knees, think about background and foreground, etc.
Another point of criticism might be the framing. The effect you were going for doesn't seem to be finished. It's still a bit too voluntary if you will. I think it would have been nice to get just a little closer to the boat for that 'In your face' kind of impact. This may also have created some depth of field, which might have been interesting with the rock on the background getting a little more blurred.
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This shot really caught my eye when I saw it.

The first thing I noticed were the beautiful colors. They looks really amazing. I don't mind the over exposure as it does really bring out the colors. The sky looks also very powerful!

I have seen a ton of shots that are similar to this one. With the boat and stuff. But this one does stand out because of its colors. Many others are B&W.

You have a very nice angle. You managed to capture the boat and also the mountain behind it perfectly.

I personally love this shot. I'd love to have a large size version of it hanging in our living room.
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Mmmm my favorite place in the world, the beach!
This is a GORGEOUS picture here. Beautiful job.

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I need to go there, good colours and perspective

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Firstly I thought it is a angry wooden giant duck... :o

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This is just perfect, I love the brightness.

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Thank you so much eyad!! :)
:iconoctobig:
Whoa, I really love this.
The colours and composition are amazing! What a beautiful location, it's almost unreal.

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:iconmudwrestler:
The place looks fantastic. The sea is calling to me. Composition is superb. I can't think of anything that would improve this picture. wonderful image.:)

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Mar 20, 2009, 11:41:00 AM

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